Seems okay so far, but why in the world does the character go to work “feeling slim and calm”?
It’s one thing to have the description of the person be that he is slim and calm at the time, but that phrase doesn’t really make sense as stated in-game.
Seems okay so far, but why in the world does the character go to work “feeling slim and calm”?
It’s one thing to have the description of the person be that he is slim and calm at the time, but that phrase doesn’t really make sense as stated in-game.